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2010-11-22 05:25 - 2010-11-22 05:25 #1 hema_kiss
hema_kiss : 请大家帮忙修改或翻译更好的
1我今天要讲的主题是顺德美食,
2下面就先看一看小简历
3接着我们看一看顺德的传统小食有哪些
4 顺德菜式以丰富多样的制作物料及调料著称,以博取众长的烹饪技艺见长,以清、鲜、爽、 嫩、滑为特色,现在就让我为大家介绍几个顺德菜的做法。

1 today I want to talk the theme is shuande food
2 at first have a look small resume
3 then we have to see what is Special Snack Of Shunde
4Shunde dishes with rich variety of production materials and dressing is famous, in order to earn the long cooking skills to grow perceptibly, to clear, fresh, bright, tender and smooth as the characteristic, now let me introduce several shunde dishes practices.

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2010-11-22 05:50 - 2010-11-22 05:50 #2 hongzh
hongzh 回复: Re:请大家帮忙修改或翻译更好的
你这个是软件翻译的吗?翻译来有什么用?

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2010-11-22 14:15 - 2010-11-22 14:15 #3 hema_kiss
hema_kiss 回复: Re:请大家帮忙修改或翻译更好的
那是我自己翻译的好不好,不知道有什么问题才问的

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2010-11-23 01:28 - 2010-11-23 01:28 #4 paper
paper 回复: Re:请大家帮忙修改或翻译更好的
1.today my topic is shunde food
2.first please have a look at the resume
3.next let's know something about the traditional food of shunde
4.shunde food is famos for its various making materisls and the condiment,as well as the absorbing coking skills, and is special for its clear,decilious,tasty,fresh and tender,so now let me introduce some ways to cook shund food.
我也只是试一下,也请你帮我看看改改

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2010-11-23 01:55 - 2010-11-23 01:55 #5 hongzh
hongzh 回复: Re: Re:请大家帮忙修改或翻译更好的

那是我自己翻译的好不好,不知道有什么问题才问的

对不起,看到把“简历”译作“resume”,还有许多地方也是字对字,没法不怀疑是软件翻译的。

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2010-11-30 02:58 - 2010-11-30 02:58 #6 Carollearner
Carollearner 回复: Re:请大家帮忙修改或翻译更好的
1我今天要讲的主题是顺德美食,
2下面就先看一看小简历
3接着我们看一看顺德的传统小食有哪些
4 顺德菜式以丰富多样的制作物料及调料著称,以博取众长的烹饪技艺见长,以清、鲜、爽、 嫩、滑为特色,现在就让我为大家介绍几个顺德菜的做法。


1. Today, I am going to talk about Shunde food.
2. First of all, let's look at the brief instroduction
3. then the traditional food in Shunde
4. Shunde food is famous for its rich ingredients and seasonings, integrating various cooking crafts and characterised by being mild, fresh, tasty, tender and smooth. Now, let me tell you how to make some Shunde dishes.


初来乍到,请各位帮忙看看, TKS!

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2012-02-13 14:13 - 2012-02-13 14:17 #7 chaoscodes
chaoscodes 回复: Re: Re:请大家帮忙修改或翻译更好的
You guys really suck at this. Westerners would yawn when they're interested. Now listen up, I'm gonna give you the real deal:

1我今天要讲的主题是顺德美食
1. Today, I'm going to introduce to you the local delicacies of Shunde Town.

2下面就先看一看小简历
2. First off, let's find out their history.

3接着我们看一看顺德的传统小食有哪些
3. Now let's see what Shunde Town has to offer on their vast array of traditional delicacies.

4 顺德菜式以丰富多样的制作物料及调料著称,以博取众长的烹饪技艺见长,以清、鲜、爽、 嫩、滑为特色,现在就让我为大家介绍几个顺德菜的做法。
4. Shunde cuisine is known for its selective use of rich, assorted ingredients and seasonings. It is endowed with an essential collection of the best cooking arts from across China, featuring an appetizing blend of color, aroma and smoothness at your delight. Now let me give you a crash course on a few dishes.

The first question which the priest and the Levite asked was: "If I stop to help this man, what will happen to me?" But the good Samaritan reversed the question: "If I do not stop to help this man, what will happen to him?"

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2012-02-13 14:31 - 2012-02-13 14:35 #8 chaoscodes
chaoscodes 回复: Re: Re:请大家帮忙修改或翻译更好的
I'm amused that some of you guys call yourselves major in English. The country's English education has produced many guided mistresses, and misguided men.

The first question which the priest and the Levite asked was: "If I stop to help this man, what will happen to me?" But the good Samaritan reversed the question: "If I do not stop to help this man, what will happen to him?"

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